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"You're My Idol"

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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 12th 2009, 7:10 pm

Free style poems of your choice.

The Rules:

01.Please be sure your poem is readable.

02.Do not quote. Post Only!

03.Make sure your writing is as neat as possible.

04.Be respectful & No threaten each other.

05.Double check your poem before you post it.

06.If anyone steals someone else poem to make it yours,
you are in big trouble!

07.The person that has the most ideas,the hottest ideas and
the most poems of all will become an idol. Good luck!


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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 12th 2009, 7:29 pm

"Apocalypse"

Human still hasn't learn
Once it burns or rots!
We have to earn
No one concerns getting shot!
Remember our miserable history
Those nasty memory of shocking
There's not an ivory
Soap for delivery off stocking

Our mind is stubborn!
Never to listen nor obey
I have a question?
Whip lash lesson of display
Pains from the past
Iron steel cast stood strong
Agony feelings that blast
Millions lives fast gone wrong!

When can we see?
Do you agree this theory?
Swarms colony of bees
It always flee unexplain mystery
People need to realize
All who decide will survive
This life is terrify!
To be denied none alive!

The future is scary!
Like dirty Harry horror movie
Scene from 20th century
Hollywood Fox industries make believe
Better prepare the outcome
I feel fearsome is coming?
Be ready to run!
Dodging the sun never standing


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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 13th 2009, 12:07 pm

"Beauty Queen"

She has the look that kills!
Along with 2 beautiful grenades
A quick glance of it and I will
Hunt down to hold the title of her blade!

This beauty of her is so rare!
I can not take my eyes away but maintain
Everyone will love to stare!
The whole world goes quiet unable to explain

A beauty queen of miss universe
It is the very best of her kind
No word that could describe as an answer
I was completely blown off my mind

She's about 5 foot seven
Very slim looking body
Like an angel from heaven
Her smile is powerfully sexy!

I wish I could make her mine
She puts on quite a nice show!
Everything is perfectly fine
This is not a dream holy cow!
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 13th 2009, 12:22 pm

"The Master Key of Celestial"

You must have the greatest imagination
To become a perfectionist poet!
For many years I have tried to solved an equation
That Albert Einstein once persuade

Perfection maybe seem to be out of reach
I see a trick playing repeatedly inside of your head
Hey! Do not be afraid to rap your lovely speech!
Make it very simple but has a powerful impact instead

The real master key word of celestian
How we use our knowledge of common sense!
And the people in the early day of Scandinavian
Believe in their magical powers ever since

The beginning of humankind existent
It's all the same secret ideas when reveal
Everyone has a microprocessor in content
Millions and millions of intelligent to steal

You just have to know how to use them
"It's like a blind person trying to see in the dark"
As for me I just practice every now and then
Over and over to catch the very best of my luck!
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Post by ntxawm September 14th 2009, 6:31 am

zoo siab koj caw kuv tuaj os tubsojntsuam e
kuv khoom taum twg mam li tuaj nrog koj seev paj huam nawb
lub caij no kuv tseem tsis tau muaj hlwb os
ua tsaug ntau
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 14th 2009, 7:21 am

Nyob zoo os Ntxawm,

Hnub no kuv zoo siab heev uas koj tuaj saib peb HMOOB THOOB NTIAJ TEB ib pliag nawb.
Ua li mas. Thaum twg koj muaj caij nyoog no ces ho khiav yeev rov tuaj tsham Tub Soj Ntsuam
lub chaw sau lus sib dhos lom zem nawb mog.

Kuv tsis yog yuav xav sib xeem nrog leej twg li nawb. Kuv tsuas tsim lub topic no ua ib qho
kev vam meej txhawb nqa peb haiv neeg Hmoob nyob thoob qab ntuj khwb xwb. Ua tsaug!
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Post by nyob zoo September 15th 2009, 4:32 am

kuv zoo siab os
kuv tsis xav yuam kev os, kuv yeej paub hais tias koj tsis xav xeem nrog leej twg los mas
kuv los twb tsis txawj thiab
lam saub ua kev lom zem xwb thaum twg muaj tswv yim mam li tuaj pab sau rau hauv no kom tau ntau ntau os, txawm tias tsis yog tam sim no los ntev mus hmoob thoob ntiaj teb yuav muaj paj huam zoo zuj zus mus mas mog
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 15th 2009, 7:42 am

"Hlub Hlob Vaj Pov"

Peb vaj Hmoob
Nyob hauv xov tshoj
Tsis tu noob
Ciaj ntug nthuav loj

Vim muaj hlob
Nai Phoo Vaj Pov
Nws tuav cob
Tsa sawv daws nrov

Mus thoob ntuj
Peb txhua tus tuaj
Nyob mem kuj
Tau zoo yub tshuaj

Nrog luag kawm
Txuj ci ntiaj teb
Thov peb hawm
Hlub tus coj keb

Cawm sawv daws
Txoj sia tsis ploj
Poob teb chaws
Thaum twg muaj noj

Yuav tsum mov
Nco ntsoov peb txiv
Hlob Vaj Pov
Vim muaj nws chiv

Thiaj vam meej
Los txog hnub no
Hmoob lub neej
Txawv deb nag hmo

Yog nej pom
Kav tsij ras xeev
Hmoob tus nom
Nws muaj nqis heev

Nawb kwv tij
Ib tsoom phooj ywg
Sawv kom txhij
Tsis hais leej twg

Me nyuam yaus
Los tus paub tab
Tej yawg laus
Tsis txhob nov qab

Mus ib sim
Nawb mog haiv Hmoob
Nco txiaj ntsim
Tuav lub txhab qoob

"This is a special poem"
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 15th 2009, 8:15 am

Hello phooj ywg Nyob Zoo,

Ua tsaug uas koj tuaj tsham kuv ib pliag ntawm no."Muaj sij hawm thaum twg no ho khiav yeev rov tuaj saib kuv
but with a poem please" Thank you for stopping by. You have a nice day.
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 15th 2009, 8:28 am

Part 1
"Hmoob Dej Dawb"

Hlob Vaj Pov
Tawm teb chaws nplog
Tsis muaj mov
Tseem kawj tsov rog

Ua ntuv zus
Pib 7 caum 5
Khib txhua tus
Tuag txom nyem ntsib

Ntau tsav yam
Nyob ntuj qub qab
Raug npas ham
Sawv ua cob fab

Zov tiv thaiv
Poj niam me nyuam
Muaj nkawj daiv
Ya tuaj quab yuam

Ib tsoom Hmoob
Quaj poob plig tag
Peb feem coob
Cov uas khiav ntag

Yog tsis ploj
Ces yeej kawg tuag
Tsis muaj koj
Kuv los kua muag

Tsis paub nyob
Ua neeg poob zoo
Vim tus hlob
Khiav lawm ntau xyoo

Tso pej xeem
Tsis muaj tus kav
Raug teeb meem
Los kua muag ntshav

Luaj naj khoom
Ntws cuag dej huam
Thov ib tsoom
Mus pab soj ntsuam

Cawm peb Hmoob
Los nyob Thaib Teb
Nqa ntsuag xyoob
Nrhiav kev nrog keb

Hmoob dej dawb
Lub neej txom nyem
Hnov mus txhawb
Tsis txhob pheej cem

Muab lawv ntiab
Rov mus av nplog
Dov rau hiab
Tom peb niam pog

"This is another special poem"
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 15th 2009, 3:56 pm

"Yaj Power,Vaj Laj Kab"

Kuv xam pom
Nplog tsoom fwv nom
Lawv khwv nyom
Xav muab Hmoob faib
Txua cooj qaib
Tua qhuab haiv Hmoob
Tshom tu noob
Tsis muaj tus ntse!
Thiaj zoo qhe
Liaj teb chaws nplog
Yuav tsum yog
Loo qhov kuv hais
Lo lus txhais
Npais ua paj huam
Hmoob raug tuam
Tawm hauv los kuj
Tseem mag quj
Hav zoov ntshav muag
Kev ploj tuag
Loj luaj naj khoom
Quaj sib phoom
Nkaum ua cob fab
Txhaum ntuj pab
Yawm saub nrog hlub
Tsoom txiv tub
Tau kev tws lawm
Yaj power!
Hnov sawv mus pab
Vaj laj kab
Cab nyuj lawv twm
Cov neeg vwm
Ntxov thais thov cais
Tsam ho hlais
Suam ub kuam lo
Ntxub yuav ntxo
To mob los nphav
Kuv ntsuas xav
Nrog chim tu siab
Yog ntsim iab
Thov mloog kuv hais
Xov wb chais
Nrhiav kev nyab xeeb
Thom nplooj nqeeb
Tsom ncaj sib pab
Tsis thab mab
Cais suav ywj tuav
Cia Hmoob ntxuav
Puav tawm tswv yim
Txo kev tsim
Tsuav peb lub neej
Nchuav lwj txeej
Ntsuav txog hnub no
Yog tsis kho
Npleem yuav liam ntxiv
Kuv ua txiv
Sawv nrau cuab yej
Nkaug cog nplej
Sua liaj nthua teb
Khaws pob zeb
Teem ntsaws qhov cav
Leem kom dav
Tsav ciaj kav ntev
Hmoob txoj kev
Coj thiaj vam meej
Noj saum neej
Sawv daws hnov qab
Pes tsawg pab
Thov txawj sib hlub
Tsoom txiv tub
Koom tuav haiv Hmoob

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Post by nkaujhnubqub September 16th 2009, 5:17 am

leej nus tubsojntsuam awwww! tuaj pom koj sau paj huam zoo zoo dhau li lawm ce txaj txaj muaj tsis paub hais li lawm na
cia kom ntev zog thiaj li paub xav tso nawb
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 16th 2009, 8:13 am

Nkauj Hnub Qub,

Ua tsaug uas koj tuaj xauj kuv ib pliag nawb mog. Kuv me leej muam nkauj Hmoob kuv los kuj tsis txawj thiab mas
tiam sis peem peem es zoo nkaus li ho sau tau ob nyuag zaj dog dig rau ib tsoom phooj ywg HMOOB THOOB NTIAJ TEB
tau nyeem laug noob nyoog xwb. Ua li nawb,hnub twg yog koj muaj sij hawm thiab koj kam no kuv thov caw koj tuaj post
ib ob txog pub peb sawv daws twm thiab mog. Ua tsaug.
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 16th 2009, 1:35 pm

"The Pro 'N' Con"

The pro
Rise together
As one giant tree
The con
Or a coward
Always run and flee

The pro
Fight for freedom
Earning bloody prices
The con
Often moan
Begging for more rice

The pro
Stand united
Ready to take a fight!
The con
Is unorganize
Living in dim light

The pro
Is not afraid
Of their new futures
The con
Usually debate
Against opposite figure

The pro
Is yang with no sins!
The con
Is slang with its yin!

The pro
Has power of a tiger!
The con
Remain lower like a loser!
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 17th 2009, 11:38 am

"Maum Nkauj Liag"

Kuv lam piav
Tham lus tshawb nrhiav
Zaj dab neeg
Uas nws txaus ntseeg
Thaum kuv me
Cov laus hais tseg
hnov lub npe
Tus ntxhais nkauj Hmoob
Nws lub koob
Nrov ntxhe zoo nkauj
Cuag kab npauj
Npaum hnub tawm ci
Neej sib ntxhi
Ntxhee txog qaum ntuj
Hav roob nyuj
Nraug vauv tuaj pom
Yog tub nom
Ntawm ib haiv neeg
Kuv qawm ntseeg
Twv taus nyiaj txiag
Maum Nkauj Liag
Tuav Mongolia
Los ntau tiam
Sawv ciaj dab neeg
Kuv thiaj ntseeg
Tej zaum muaj tiag
Maum Nkauj Liag
Caum Mongolia
Ua lawv niam
Los txog hunb no
Nrog kuv nco
Tus ntxhais nkauj Hmoob
Yog lub noob
Suav yuav mus cog
Vam ntxuaj ntxog
Tawg paj txi txiv
Vim nws chiv
Tsa Mongolia
Zoo txaus nyiam
Ntxim xuav pom nyoo
Cia nws khoo
Kav tuav teb chaws
Tsav sawv daws
Fwm Muam Nkauj Liag
Tshwm muaj tiag
Av Mongolia
Pes tsawg tiam
Thov Hmoob nco nws!
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 17th 2009, 12:01 pm

"Cia pob Zeb,Zov Qe Qauj"

Nrog kuv mus
Cog lus paj huam
Nco cov muam
Nyob av los tsuas
Ncav sib huas
Zoo li npau suav
Kuv xav yuav
Tuav nws txhais tes
Hla thab le
Xa kuv mus tsev
Txog tom kev
Hais lus qab zib
Noj zaub tsib
Los yeej txaus siab
Tsis muaj phiab
Kua txob ntsim iab
Los tsuav yog koj
Kuv lam noj
Cia siab twj ywm
Tsis hais tshwm
Zais vwm ntsia koj
Nkauj Hmoob thoj
Los yog xeem Lauj
Kuv muam phauj
Me ntxhais ntxim hlub
Tshav ntuj kub
Daus los tsheej hmo
Kuv tseem nco
Kho siab cua ntxuaj
Xav noj tshuaj
Qw quaj da av
Tus me tav
Nplooj siab nyob deb
Ci pob zeb
Ntxias Hmoob mes kas
Thaum tsim ras
Zaum chim npav tuag
Poob ntsej muag
Yoob xav tua neeg
Yeej tsis ntseeg
Leej twg lawm mog
Ntxhais Hmoob Nplog
Cev yiag cuag tauj
Hau qe qauj
Tus me txawj dag
Kuv thiaj mag
Koj noj khaub hlab
Vim ntshaw nyab
Poj niam zoo nkauj
Piam tsoo nrauj
Lawm ces tsis tos


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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 17th 2009, 12:32 pm

"Txiv Ua Ntej Tub Tua Ntxiv"

Puag hnub hmos
Nyuam qhuav dhau los
Lauj Kiab toom
Thauj coj txib tsoom
Ua tus ib
Sawv pib yawg thib
Tsim qhia chiv
Tsa Hmoob de txiv
Nqa me thoob
Tub Npis Lis Foom
Sawv los koom
Tho kev ua ntej
Qhia cog nplej
Txua nom ua tswv
Txoj kev khwv
Nyob hauv los kuj
Cob kawm txuj
Nrog haiv neeg nplog
Thaum kawj rog
Hluav taws kub xov
Hlob Vaj Pov
Ho los tuav coj
Tua Phom loj
Zov thoob haim nras
Pab mes kas
Dov txiav txoj kev
Ua nkhaus chev
Zoo li qab qwj
Yaj Soob Lwj
Hmoob tus niam ntawv
Thaum aib sawv
Piav txog pom case
Nyob Noom Hej
Tsoom Hmoob ntxub nws
Khaum kev tws
Mam tig los xav
tsis muaj av
Kav ntuj qub qab
Kawj cob fab
Hmoob tawg 3 pab
Quaj ntsuag ploj yuag
Hawj Zoov Zuag
Coj nyob Phu Npiab
Lub neej tshiab
Txom nyem tuag tshaib
Khiav mus Thaib
Cawm siav raws hlob
Zaum thib ob
Thoj nam tawg rog
Tawm av nplog
Tuaj as mes kas
Muaj kuv ras
Thov Hmoob sib hlub
Ntsia thaum ub
Qhia txheej tiam no
Cim khaws nco
Kuv zaj paj huam
Tub Soj Ntsuam
Tua neev tim toj
Piv qhia koj
Txoj kev vam meej
Coj txiv neej
Pej xeem sawv daws
Tuav teb chaws
Peb zoo li no
Raws kuv nco
Thaum nom ua ntej
Pom phaj ej!
Txawj vas sib hlub
Muaj nyiaj kub
Kuv hais qhia ntxiv
Chiv hauv paus
Tuaj hlob luaj qhaus
Hmoob lub neej
Nws yuav vam meej
Yam tsob nplej
Yawg cog nyob nej
Cov tom qab
Hnov txawj khib pab
Thoob siab koom ntsws
Nyooj txhib ntws
Coob npaum xub ntsaum
Hmoob thiaj xyaum
Sawv ua ib pawg
Txog thaum kawg
Luaj teb muaj chaw
Peb tsis ntshaw
Tseb nom tub rog
Sawv vij vog
Hawv xov laj kab
Txawj sib pab
Yog zoo li no
Yuav tsum nco
Kaw tuaj nruab siab
Nyob cog txhiab
Mus txog 100 xyoo
Hmoob thiaj zoo
Ciaj ib haiv neeg
Hlob ruaj nreeg
Muaj npe nto hmoo
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 17th 2009, 12:57 pm

"Lub Hom Phiaj Npau Suav"

Leej twg coj
Ntswg ua tus loj
Nres pej xeem
yuav tsum muaj pheem
Lub siab ncaj
Sib pab ciaj vaj
Hlub sawv daws
Keb kuaj teb chaws
Noj sib qaws
Raws kev ntshaw nthuav
Koj los tuav
Kuv dhos yeej haum
Qhia neeg xyaum
Ib tug zuj zus
Cib lo lus
Cob suab kwv txhiaj
Puab hom phiaj
Tauj xub npau suav
Cuab tus puav
Qhuab ntuas paub txog
Teb chaws nplog
Peb neej qub qab
Rog phim npab
Yog Paj Cai Vwj
Nws sawv ntswj
Tswj cawm pej xeem
Tsis pub zeem
Ntov ntoo lug kev
Zam muv plev
Mob quaj nrov plhw
Chob pob tw
Nqov hu lub ntuj
Tsov mos npuj
Tsis tau chaw nkaum
Kuv thiaj xyaum
Sau zaj paj huam
Qhia cov muam
Kwv tij sawv ntsaws
Thov nej khaws
Zov tej ntsuj ci
Coj mus ntxhi
Ntsia ua dab neeg
yuav tsum ntseeg
Mob siab kawm txuj
Nyob mem kuj
Tus hlob nqus yau
Rov mus nrau
Nrhiav mov daim av
Cia peb tsav
Kav ua Hmoob tug!

"This poem is very special"
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Post by nkaujhnubqub September 17th 2009, 1:06 pm

kuv tsis paub

lam sim saub

txog kev ua si

lam kawm ntxhi

tsis paub xav

lub siab dav

lam los nrog
txhua tus ua si mog

vim twb tuaj txog

kuv tsis txawj

cia nej ua tus thawj

kuv mam kawm lawv qab

mam cia rau nej cab

txawm tsis zoo

los nej ua zoo nroo

kuv thiaj tsis txaj muag

kuv thiaj rov tuaj cuag

ua tsaug rau hmoob thoob ntiaj teb

mus lawm lwm hnub mam rov feb
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 17th 2009, 4:39 pm




"Nkauj Hnub Qub"

Me Nkauj hnub Qub
Txiv Yaj Tub Soj Ntsuam
Nws tsis muaj khub
Tshav ntuj kub cuaj ntxuam
Leej twg thiaj hlub?

Zoo siab koj tuaj
Kuv tsis muaj phooj ywg
Kho siab xav quaj
Vim nws nyuaj npaum twg
Neeg tsis care xyuaj!

Kuv thov ua tsaug
Koj thawj zaug hnub no
Txoj kev nkauj nraug
Yog tau taug yuav nco
Ntsoov txog thaum laug

Leej muam siab zoo
Rov tuaj ncoo sib tham
Yog wb txoj hmoo
Mov qom ntoo qaib sam
yuav muaj lwm xyoo


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"Apocalypse"



Human still hasn't learn
Once it burns or rots!
We have to earn
No one concerns getting shot!
Remember our miserable history
Those nasty memory of shocking
There's not an ivory
Soap for delivery off stocking

Our mind is stubborn!
Never to listen nor obey
I have a question?
Whip lash lesson of display
Pains from the past
Iron steel cast stood strong
Agony feelings that blast
Millions lives fast gone wrong!

When can we see?
Do you agree this theory?
Swarms colony of bees
It always flee unexplain mystery
People need to realize
All who decide will survive
This life is terrify!
To be denied none alive!

The future is scary!
Like dirty Harry horror movie
Scene from 20th century
Hollywood Fox industries make believe
Better prepare the outcome
I feel fearsome is coming?
Be ready to run!
Dodging the sun never standing



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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 20th 2009, 4:43 pm

Tub Hmoob,

Wow! Pretty kool....hehe! Thanks. Please keep my poem the way it was composed because it was supposed to be a
4 words sentence and 5 words sentence.But I like your design though....hehe! Ua tsaug nawb.
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Tub Soj Ntsuam wrote:Tub Hmoob,

Wow! Pretty kool....hehe! Thanks. Please keep my poem the way it was composed because it was supposed to be a
4 words sentence and 5 words sentence.But I like your design though....hehe! Ua tsaug nawb.

ib daim duab no thiab.. koj nyiam no koj muab mus tso rau lo tau os?

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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 21st 2009, 6:28 pm

Nyob zoo Tub Hmoob,

Ua tsaug os. Koj muab zaj paj huam nkauj hnub qub re edit tau kuj zoo nkauj kawg nawb. Cia kuv mam xav saib yuav ua li cas
es thiaj zoo li qhov kuv nyiam. I will let you know. Thank you.
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Post by nkaujhnubqub September 28th 2009, 12:27 pm

mes leej nus siab dawb tub soj ntsuam
nws tsis muaj tus tawb tsis muaj tus tshuam
cia nws leej muam tuaj txuas lus ua si
lam nrog nws sib ntxhi rau koj kev lom zem
lam tauv pem koj hnub txhob ntev
los saib nws tsev los hais nyob zoo
tuaj nrog nws nroo kom siab kaj
txhob rawm maj tu nws lub siab
ib hnub lub ntuj tshiab yuav pub ib tug
nws mam cug nws lub xwb pwg
txawm yog leej twg los nws ua siab loj
ntuj mam coj ib tus zoo ntxhais
tuaj nrog nws hais nws mamhlub koj
txog hnub ploj os mog kuv me leej nus
ua nws siab kom tus mog



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Post by Guest September 28th 2009, 5:56 pm

Welcome nkauj Nub Qub,

Zoosiab ntau koj rov tuaj nrog Tubsojntsuam sau paj huam lawm kuv zoo siab heev li os.
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Post by nkaujhnubqub September 29th 2009, 5:58 am

kuv los zoo siab tuaj koom nrog nej ua si hauv no thiab na tij laug
koj qhia seb yuav ua li cas thiaj li yuav tso tau daim duab ua daim font li koj ua rau tub soj ntsuam na tij laug
kuv tsuas kopy xwb tsis paub tso yog daim tshiab no kuv yuav tso li cas thiaj tau na

ua tsaug nawb tubhmoob

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Zoosiab ntau koj rov tuaj nrog Tubsojntsuam sau paj huam lawm kuv zoo siab heev li os.
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 29th 2009, 1:07 pm

"Nkauj Hnub Qub"

Ua tsaug rau koj zaj paj huam os mog. Nws muaj sij hawm no kav tsij tuaj sau txoj puav ntxiv nawb mog. Thaum twg kuv muaj caij
nyoog kuv mam tuaj sau paj huam tshiab rau peb sawv daws nyeem ua si. Kuv thov ua tsaug rau koj lub sij hawm nawb mog.
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam September 29th 2009, 1:16 pm

Nyob zoo Tub Hmoob,

Twb tsis tau txawj thiab os. Lam tuaj sau sim saib nej puas nrog nyiam thiab saib sawv daws puas xav li cas rau kuv xwb.
Ohhh!! Kuv kuj tsim tau ib phau ntawv paj huam tawm xyoo 2008,kuv muab 10 txoj paj huam tso rau hauv phau ntawv.
Yog muaj leej twg nyiam no ho mus tshawb nrhiav ntawm Hmong ABC Book Store nyob Saint Paul xeev Minnesota.

Kuv tseem niaj hnub create or design phau ob tiam sis lub sij hawm no kuv muaj ntau yam hauj lwm los tsoo kuv...haha!!
Hopefully I will have it done or out as soon as possible. This time I will have 10 Hmong poems and the other 10 is English.
Thank you for stopping by...You're My Idol...chav tsev sau txuj ci Hmoob lus sib dhos. Ua tsaug. Have a nice day!
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Post by nkaujhnubqub September 29th 2009, 1:34 pm

nyob zoo tus nus tubsojntsuam
kuv tawm tuaj tshuam vim muaj koj
tuaj txog tij toj saib pom koj seev
lub suab deeg deev kuv lub siab
kuv thiaj zoo siab xav nrog koj hais
ntshe yuav zoo dua ntais tsis txawj tag li
xyaum nrog koj ntxhi los ntshe yuav tsis txhaum thiab
txawm sau tsis ntxim koj siab los txhob xav li cas
lam tuaj ras nrog kuv
lam thuv kom tas kev lom zem
kuv txawm phem tsej los siab zoo
ces koj lam nrog kuv nroo mog
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Post by Guest September 29th 2009, 2:52 pm

mes leej nus siab dawb tub soj ntsuam
nws tsis muaj tus tawb tsis muaj tus tshuam
cia nws leej muam tuaj txuas lus ua si
lam nrog nws sib ntxhi rau koj kev lom zem
lam tauv pem koj hnub txhob ntev
los saib nws tsev los hais nyob zoo
tuaj nrog nws nroo kom siab kaj
txhob rawm maj tu nws lub siab
ib hnub lub ntuj tshiab yuav pub ib tug
nws mam cug nws lub xwb pwg
txawm yog leej twg los nws ua siab loj
ntuj mam coj ib tus zoo ntxhais
tuaj nrog nws hais nws mamhlub koj
txog hnub ploj os mog kuv me leej nus
ua nws siab kom tus mog





Tau kawg os Nkauj Hnub Qub, kuv mus tos kuv tus baby boy tom school tso kuv mamli lo ua rau koj os.. tsi nyuab kiag li os. Koj xav kom muab cai ua ob daim, cov paj huam nws nyob nws daim hnub qub nws nyob nws lo tau os. Ib pliag kuv los ces kuv mam li ua rau koj nawb!!.
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Post by Guest September 29th 2009, 3:46 pm

<center><table width=600 height=350 cellpadding=1 cellspacing=3><tr><td valign=top><img src="http://www.imagesnet.net/data/media/110/stars.jpg"height="300" width="300"> <td valign="top"> [i]<font color=blue>mes leej nus siab dawb tub soj ntsuam
nws tsis muaj tus tawb tsis muaj tus tshuam
cia nws leej muam tuaj txuas lus ua si
lam nrog nws sib ntxhi rau koj kev lom zem
lam tauv pem koj hnub txhob ntev
los saib nws tsev los hais nyob zoo
tuaj nrog nws nroo kom siab kaj
txhob rawm maj tu nws lub siab
ib hnub lub ntuj tshiab yuav pub ib tug
nws mam cug nws lub xwb pwg
txawm yog leej twg los nws ua siab loj
ntuj mam coj ib tus zoo ntxhais
tuaj nrog nws hais nws mamhlub koj
txog hnub ploj os mog kuv me leej nus
ua nws siab kom tus mog

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Tau kawg os Nkauj Hnub Qub, kuv mus tos kuv tus baby boy tom school tso kuv mamli lo ua rau koj os.. tsi nyuab kiag li os. Koj xav kom muab cai ua ob daim, cov paj huam nws nyob nws daim hnub qub nws nyob nws lo tau os. Ib pliag kuv los ces kuv mam li ua rau koj nawb!!.[/quote]
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam October 6th 2009, 12:37 pm

Nyob zoo Nkauj Hnub Qub,

Ua tsaug rau koj zaj paj huam nawb mog. Yog muaj sij hawm no,yij meem tuaj sau kom ntau ntag nawb mog.
Kuv tseem yuav rov qab tuaj sau ib hom paj huam sib dhos tshiab tiam sis ntshe yuav yog thaum twg kuv khoom
thiab kho kom tau zoo zoo mam coj tuaj post pub sawv daws nyeem/twm nawb. Ua tsaug!!
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Post by nkaujhnubqub November 16th 2009, 3:32 am

Ua tsaug os tubhmoob
noj qab nyob zoo rau tubsojntsuam, xasuab thiab koj os mog

tau ntev kuv tsis tau tuaj saib koj lawm es nej ho nyob li cas thiab nyob li cas lawm os?
kuv los tseem ok thiab os
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mes leej nus siab dawb tub soj ntsuam
nws tsis muaj tus tawb tsis muaj tus tshuam
cia nws leej muam tuaj txuas lus ua si
lam nrog nws sib ntxhi rau koj kev lom zem
lam tauv pem koj hnub txhob ntev
los saib nws tsev los hais nyob zoo
tuaj nrog nws nroo kom siab kaj
txhob rawm maj tu nws lub siab
ib hnub lub ntuj tshiab yuav pub ib tug
nws mam cug nws lub xwb pwg
txawm yog leej twg los nws ua siab loj
ntuj mam coj ib tus zoo ntxhais
tuaj nrog nws hais nws mamhlub koj
txog hnub ploj os mog kuv me leej nus
ua nws siab kom tus mog





Tau kawg os Nkauj Hnub Qub, kuv mus tos kuv tus baby boy tom school tso kuv mamli lo ua rau koj os.. tsi nyuab kiag li os. Koj xav kom muab cai ua ob daim, cov paj huam nws nyob nws daim hnub qub nws nyob nws lo tau os. Ib pliag kuv los ces kuv mam li ua rau koj nawb!!.
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Post by nkaujhnubqub November 16th 2009, 3:34 am

Hnub no kuv nco nej
tuaj txoj los tsuas pom tus me dej
ntshiab si
tsis muaj ib tus me kab ntxhi
nej puas noj qab nyob zoo
me muam twb tuaj nug nej moo
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Post by Guest November 16th 2009, 5:42 am

nkaujhnubqub wrote:Hnub no kuv nco nej
tuaj txoj los tsuas pom tus me dej
ntshiab si
tsis muaj ib tus me kab ntxhi
nej puas noj qab nyob zoo
me muam twb tuaj nug nej moo
Nkauj hnub qub koj pua nyob zoo, Tubzoonraug tseem nyob tos koj ntsoov
Lub ncauj tsi nroos lub siab yeej xav ntxoov
Nkauj hnubqub ua ca koj mus lawm ntev loo, tubzoonraug niaj hnub tos koj ntsoov
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Post by nkaujhnubqub November 16th 2009, 6:05 am

kuv twb tuaj lawm os kuv me tijlaug zoo
nws tseem niaj hnub nug kuv moo

zoo siab kawg li
nws me muam tuaj sau lus taum nrog nws ntxhi

nyob zoo koj os tubzoonraug
kuv twb tuaj saib koj tuaj ua koj tsaug

rau txhua yam koj tau pab
pluas mob zaub koj ua kuj tau qab

zoo siab tuaj hauv koj tsev
lub siab twb nyob ncaj tau hauv txoj kev

tuaj mus loj leeb ua si lawm
kaj ntug ces thiaj yuav rov tawm

nws me nkauj hnub qub nyob zoo mog
zoo siab nws tawm tuaj txog


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nkaujhnubqub wrote:Hnub no kuv nco nej
tuaj txoj los tsuas pom tus me dej
ntshiab si
tsis muaj ib tus me kab ntxhi
nej puas noj qab nyob zoo
me muam twb tuaj nug nej moo
Nkauj hnub qub koj pua nyob zoo, Tubzoonraug tseem nyob tos koj ntsoov
Lub ncauj tsi nroos lub siab yeej xav ntxoov
Nkauj hnubqub ua ca koj mus lawm ntev loo, tubzoonraug niaj hnub tos koj ntsoov
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Post by Guest November 16th 2009, 2:38 pm

nkaujhnubqub wrote:kuv twb tuaj lawm os kuv me tijlaug zoo
nws tseem niaj hnub nug kuv moo

zoo siab kawg li
nws me muam tuaj sau lus taum nrog nws ntxhi

nyob zoo koj os tubzoonraug
kuv twb tuaj saib koj tuaj ua koj tsaug

rau txhua yam koj tau pab
pluas mob zaub koj ua kuj tau qab

zoo siab tuaj hauv koj tsev
lub siab twb nyob ncaj tau hauv txoj kev

tuaj mus loj leeb ua si lawm
kaj ntug ces thiaj yuav rov tawm

nws me nkauj hnub qub nyob zoo mog
zoo siab nws tawm tuaj txog
Nyob zoo Nkauj hnub qub tus me dawb mos ntxim hlub
Txhuas txhua hnub kuv yeej zov rawv ntawm ncauj kes
xav twj ywm hai tias muaj ib hnub kuv tus me nkauj Hnubqub
Yuav tuaj txog ntawm kawj tse
Tuszoonraug niaj hnub nyob tos xav hai tias nkauj hnub qub tsi los

Tubzoonraug tseem xav li xwb nkauj hnub qub twb nyob pem kwj txos.

Zoosiab koj tuasj o. Nkauj hnub qub.
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam November 23rd 2009, 11:23 pm

"Nkauj Hnub Qub"

Ua cas ntu no tsis pom koj tuaj show paj huam lawm os lod? Rov qab tuaj sau paj huam mas nawb.
Kuv tseem npaj cov tshiab thiab tsis tshua khoom pes tsawg es thiaj tsis tuaj post ntxiv xwb.

I will come back to post some more poems.
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam January 2nd 2010, 2:45 am

nkaujhnubqub wrote:Hnub no kuv nco nej
tuaj txoj los tsuas pom tus me dej
ntshiab si
tsis muaj ib tus me kab ntxhi
nej puas noj qab nyob zoo
me muam twb tuaj nug nej moo

Hello Nkauj Hnub Qub,

Happy New Year of 2010 rau koj & koj tsev neeg txhua tus. Ntus no kuv tsis pom koj thiab tsis ntsib koj li lawm es koj ua dab tsi xwb?
Muaj sij hawm ces ho ncig yeev rov tuaj sau zaj puav paj huam tseg rau kuv tau twm os mog. Ua tsaug!! Bye..
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam January 13th 2010, 10:40 am

~Special Gift~

((Love))
Is a game of true or dare!
(((Enough)))
Can never be satisfied just to stare!

It has to be real you can not fake!
To show your emotional feelings
Creating a sweet deal of stake
Or there is no sign of smiling

When you've proven unselfish
The reward is greater than ever
These longing of hungers will meet its wish
A good chance of kingdom come together

"Love is a special gift"
If you've sent it I'll receive
Both of us must lift
To tie a knot and believe
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam April 16th 2010, 2:02 pm

"Be Yourself or Get More"

Be all you can be is good enough
Life sometime is pretty tough!
Most people satisfies with they were born
I've never take anything that has been torn!

The world is full 'n' fill with extreme beauty!
Keep on searching you'll find great value of your money
Never sitting duck in one same old spot!
All of the good stuffs are out there hidden in its slot

Get up and go get 'em or you'll miss everything!
"Do not let others take the wheel of fortune spinning"
It is better to be the boss of your life!
Make way through the humidity jungle like a bull strife

Success lies within your own hands
The harder you fight the better it'll gain demand!
Why do you allow the future to be left behind?
Great winners always seek their goals in mind

There's only one good shot to make history!
I must accomplish everything for a memory
The law of natures that's how it should be!
Nothing stands in the way just grab all the you need
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Post by Tub Soj Ntsuam May 4th 2010, 2:59 am

"Hero Of Hmoob Thoob Ntiaj Teb"

I have been searching for a hero
Starting from north pole to the south
My number begins with a plain zero
So far I've seen many rapping mouth

None suitable for an idol!
The world has over six billions human beings
I'm lookin' forward to meet a rare stone marble
As shiny as a crystal clear bird with wings

Where can I find this great teacher?
Time is running out and I'm a little tired
This person could be a he or her!
I'm racing against the sun before it expires

Hello everyone out there!
Could somebody give me a head start!?
The road I'm taken is going nowhere
Changing direction will ruin my beautiful art

My savior lord from heaven of above
There is no other place that I have not look
You're the world greatest soul of love
Please help me complete these 1000 pages of poem book

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Post by NtxhaisMoob August 26th 2010, 6:28 pm

TubSojNtsuam,

Cas koj yuav sau tau pajhuam zoo ua luaj
Ntse koj yog keeb kwm noob ntse
Saib ma koj yog neeg tshaj lij tshaj tej

Kuv tsis txawj sau pahuam
Kuv lam los sau me me cuam tshuam
Qhua rau koj txoj kev tshaj lij
Kuv nyeem tag ces kuv lub suab cia li ntsiag to
Vim xav sau los tsis caug koj cov
Siab me rawg tsam raug luag thuam
Ces yuav txaj muag txog hnub tuag....hehehee


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Post by Tubzoonraug August 26th 2010, 7:24 pm

NtxhaiMoob, Koj tuaj txog lig heev lawm, Tubsojntsuam twb tsi tuaj tau 2 xyoo no lawm vim tsi muaj leej twg nrog nws sau paj huam ces nws nkee2 heev lawm. Tub sojntsuam nyob tom Hmongza ma.
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Post by NtxhaisMoob August 29th 2010, 10:53 am

Tubzoonraug,

Cas kuv yuav tuaj lig ua luaj li na. Es nws ho mus qhov twg lawm cas nws tsis rov tuaj lawm ma. Nws txawj sau pajhuam heev li. Lwm hnub nws rov tuaj tso kuv yuav kom nws qhia kuv sau seb.

Ua tsaug koj qhia kuv paub os. Vam tias nws yuav rov tuaj thiab yom.
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Post by Davdub August 29th 2010, 11:08 am

NtxhaisMoob wrote:Tubzoonraug,

Cas kuv yuav tuaj lig ua luaj li na. Es nws ho mus qhov twg lawm cas nws tsis rov tuaj lawm ma. Nws txawj sau pajhuam heev li. Lwm hnub nws rov tuaj tso kuv yuav kom nws qhia kuv sau seb.

Ua tsaug koj qhia kuv paub os. Vam tias nws yuav rov tuaj thiab yom.

Tus phooj ywg Tubsojntsuam nws tsi tuaj lawm vim tsi muaj leej twg nrog nws sau paj huam o. Nws paub sau paj haum thiab singer thiab pob!. Kuv xav tej zaum nws yeej yuav tuajthiab os.

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